For this consultation session, I was arranged to see Lecturer Ellen Rogers to discuss the progress of my dissertation. At first glance, the essay looks well written but I was looking for areas of improvement, particularly the contents I wanted to talk about in my essay.
Firstly, define what is “provocative” in Provocative Imagery.
some of the ideas are complicated
- Robert Capa? what is the connection to the landscape and provocative?
- controversial, subversive, rhetoric – aren’t they all parts of provocativeness?
- Provocative Imagery: define what is “provocative”
- what changes a person’s view on provocative images?
Simplify the conclusion yo make your point made known. Consider going about my dissertation from these perspectives instead:
- Cultural/ historical
- Political/ propaganda
She admitted that the topic I chose was quite challenging to begin with, and this made it difficult for her to advice, and eventually told me to consult course leader James Smith for better advice.